Editing novel 0.1

Well today, today has been the beginning of a new generation of my obedience towards family norms and media frenzy. For today, I have begun the editing techniques for my piece of work that I am writing.The first edit should be done my the middle of next while the next edit should take a week or two and then off to the publishing house...but which one? Start big or go home or just see what happens in my predetermined lifestyle and just type madly on upcoming stories for the next novella. I want my own poetry and I have some, maybe add a song on there or something. For this is just the beginning, you think you see me, but i am far away, you must squint.

Type later. Ta ta.

subjectivity is the subject

Riding along just the other day
Minding my own darn business
Laughing in the desert wind baby
Laughing for my may hey day
Now Jupiter is rising closely
Rebecca ain't one to please
The cat o tales takes a turn in the sand
She only gotta tease me bad
Jamming with the sun in my eyes
River queen, Far behind
Take steps in the films that you love the most 
J Cassavettes makes you proud
Dont cha give me a heart ache now
Please yourself gradually
Windows of opportunity lean now
Gold dust over no trees
Wondering if I would have been something
Leaving all messes behind
Neither one down for company
None of them give her luck
The watcher looks on watching 
The caterer is full of bread
The chimpanzee goes out of his mind
Whatever he please, yeah yeah yeah, 
whatever he pleases he gets